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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon May 02, 2011 6:35 pm

myfantasy wrote:
that ending for zeru and serene was really abrupt


Indeed
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun May 08, 2011 12:44 pm

Date ~ Janurary 18th, 1999
Time ~ 2:12p.m
Location ~ Outskirts of Bale



Chapter 8 ~ Miranda Menu


Alright, here is what happend from the END OF CHAPTER 7!!! not 7.5. They fought Z-HeinZ and he went insane crack mode and like ran off... King Albert is healed and we all go back on the Road... so Who in teh story so far? Zeru,Antlan,Serene,Royke,Lenna,Hakura,Zure,Zeika Dart,Shana,Meru,Kongol,King Albert, right?

W/e... Lulz

{Start}

On the road, Dart leads everyone to find the remaining 3 Dragoons scattered somewhere in the "New World". The next town they head to is somewhere in the Northern country, Mille Seseau, in search of Miranda Menu, the Silver Dragoon.

After fighting their 1337th battle on the way

Antlan:J3ZUZ CHR1ST! H0W M4NY M0NST3RS AR3 TH3R3?
Zeru:Well... 1.At least we don't have to deal with Golems, Crimson Guardians, and Dragons. 2.Why are you talking like that?
Antlan:1.Y34h 1 gu3ss th4t 1s tru3 and 2.Cuz 1 f33l l1k3 1t.
Royke:Thank god we don't have to fight I.O.E's anymore.

As the FS crew agrees, a random I.O.E appears

Everyone:0_0
I.O.E:O_O
Everyone:O.O
I.O.E: xD
FS Crew:Dx

H-Zure:RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!
Meru:Ehhh? Why?
Antlan:JUST DO IT, YOU'LL DIE BY LIKE 2 ATTACKS
Dart:What the hell?

Everyone runs and the I.O.E chases them for an extremely long time until the I.O.E realizes it is too fat and slow and makes a Q.Q face. The party collapse in exhaustion and somewhat pain.

Zeika:Why is there a I.O.E in this area?
Serene:Well I can guess why.
Antlan:G-God?
Serene:Ummm... No... More like HeinZ
Dart:Would that seriously have killed us if we tried to fi-
FS Crew:YES!!! [Y33333333SSSSSSSS]

Everyone complains and argues, but eventually gets back on track.

Date ~ Janurary 18th, 1999
Time ~ 6:23p.m
Location ~ Deningard

Meru:Yay! We get to see Miranda!
Shana:Is that right?
Zeru:Another dragoon I presume?
Dart:The Silver Dragoon
Lenna:Is that suppose to be "Light"?
Dart:Somewhat. Now we need to go to the crystal palace though.
Antlan:Which way Captain?
Dart:Hmm... acutally it has been awhile since i've came here.
Lenna:Your kidding, right?
Shana:Hey, wait. What is happening over there?

In a nearby Inn, there is smoking coming out, soon after two boys are kicked out. Upon further observation, they are equiped with a Sword and Shield, and what seems to be an attached Bowgun.

???:Dammit! This is all your fault!
???:What are you talking about? Your getting too close to my sister! I'm not allowing some novice Swordsman who can't even control a Soma right date my sister!

Four other people come out.

???:You guys need to stop fighting! Your getting a crowd started.
???:F*** this, I'm gonna kill you Shing!
Shing:Be my guest.

The FS Crew and Dragoon Party decides to ignore the noise and walks towards the Crystal Palace.

Location ~ Deningard - Crystal Palace

A girl is seen out on the Balcony.

Dart:Alright, I'm going to talk to Miranda, you guys can do w/e you want.
Meru:Awww, your no fun Dart. I'm coming too!

Meru locks her arm around Dart. As Dart and Meru go inside up to the balcony, everyone starts to just lounge outside.

Lulz Since Before wanted it, I'll do Hakura and Royke's Event Scene

WARNING!!! WARNING!!! WARNING!!!

IF YOU ARE UNDERAGED AND DO NOT KNOW THIS VERY TERM

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YOU ARE IN DANGER OF READING SOME VERY DISTURBING DETAILS, please skip down to until it says

~ Safe Point ~


Royke ` Hakura






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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun May 08, 2011 3:15 pm

This is such a loose fanfiction I cannot seriously comprehend what is going on anymore. o_o''

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Give more details in the story of where they are.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon May 09, 2011 12:51 pm

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Date ~ Janurary 18th, 1999
Time ~ 2:12p.m
Location ~ Outskirts of Bale



Chapter 8 ~ Finally Reunited


Alright, here is what happend from the END OF CHAPTER 7!!! not 7.5. They fought Z-Heins and he went insane crack mode and like ran off... King Albert is healed and we all go back on the Road... so Who in teh story so far? Zeru,Antlan,Serene,Royke,Lenna,Hakura,Zure,Zeika Dart,Shana,Meru,Kongol,King Albert, right?

um... what?
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon May 09, 2011 2:18 pm

Oh yeah! Chapter 8 is wayyy too short. D:
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sat May 14, 2011 2:27 pm

Before wrote:
Oh yeah! Chapter 8 is wayyy too short. D:

I had to go at that time, now i feel lazy
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri May 27, 2011 7:21 pm

Get motivated. Do work! RAWR! D: Stop being lazy and start writing fanfictions or at least a guide! :]
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sat May 28, 2011 12:21 am

twas delicious though.
-good for the eyes-
compared to what i was reading though lol
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:35 pm

Zhoin Must Update. x-x
Updaateee Zhoin.
Updateeee. D:
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:41 pm

lololololol sorry i play DFO now so i don't get on as much >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:18 pm

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lololololol sorry i play DFO now so i don't get on as much >.>
BAD DFO BAD! D:
Stop playing DFO so much. :P
Play moar Maplestory or something, just update your Fanfiction. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Thu Jun 09, 2011 1:08 pm

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ZhoinX wrote:
lololololol sorry i play DFO now so i don't get on as much >.>
BAD DFO BAD! D:
Stop playing DFO so much. :P
Play moar Maplestory or something, just update your Fanfiction. xD

DW when i have free time ill update >.> when i get high level in DFO LULZ

Mai Roflcopter goes SOI SOI SOI SOI SOI SOI SOI
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:27 pm

.... I will pwn you with my level 14 - 18 Slayer if you don't start updating.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:37 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Thu Jun 09, 2011 9:55 pm

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lol before.
I've beaten level 50 slayers before! I'm not afraid! :D
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Jun 10, 2011 5:48 am

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lol before.
I've beaten level 50 slayers before! I'm not afraid! :D

Unless ur a God Slayer, i highly doubt any level 14-18 can kill level 50 slayers, espacially Grand/Weaponmasters
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Jun 12, 2011 7:28 am

meh, people said I have high/super vision in predictions [YES I ACTUALLY PREDICT WHAT ATTACK THEY'LL USE] =D
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:41 pm

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meh, people said I have high/super vision in predictions [YES I ACTUALLY PREDICT WHAT ATTACK THEY'LL USE] =D

Such Lies
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon Jun 13, 2011 2:57 pm

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meh, people said I have high/super vision in predictions [YES I ACTUALLY PREDICT WHAT ATTACK THEY'LL USE] =D

Such Lies
D:< Lies are for the weak.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:20 pm

Updated.

Why my signature not here o_O

... o Nvm
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Tue Jun 14, 2011 2:52 pm

Zhoin, I like your old picture more, even though I dont' remember it. :p
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:23 pm

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Zhoin, I like your old picture more, even though I dont' remember it. :p

What picture? I never had a Signature or Profile Picture before
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:49 pm

No wonder I can't remember it. :P You never had one. I still prefer the no picture one. +D
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:52 pm

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No wonder I can't remember it. :P You never had one. I still prefer the no picture one. +D

I prefer mine becuz it makes me look freakin Epic and have you even read my updated Ch.8?
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Tue Jun 14, 2011 4:29 pm

Serene:Ummm... No... More like Heinz
Dart:Would that seriously have killed us if we tried to fi-

You forgot to capitalize the z in HeinZ

Also, do all of them.
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