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PostSubject: Another Fanfic   Sun May 01, 2011 10:26 pm

For those of you who don't care for backstory, there are no spoilers. For those who do, go away. By request of myfantasy.

Spoiler:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Sun May 01, 2011 10:27 pm

First and Foremost. Title the Chapter Number, as well as the Genre and Age requirement.
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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Sun May 01, 2011 10:28 pm

Before wrote:
First and Foremost. Title the Chapter Number, as well as the Genre and Age requirement.
*Rolls eyes* Perfectionist.

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Sun May 01, 2011 10:31 pm

NeoFrost wrote:
Before wrote:
First and Foremost. Title the Chapter Number, as well as the Genre and Age requirement.
*Rolls eyes* Perfectionist.
It's the basic rules of Fanfiction making! :O Do you expect a kid to read about Mature content? o.o''
Anyway, I don't understand this because I haven't defeated Xannel/got up to that part yet. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Mon May 02, 2011 5:35 pm

this whole topic is a spoiler
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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Mon May 02, 2011 8:49 pm

...*Glares at Darren*

...Fixed. F3

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Mon May 02, 2011 8:57 pm

Foolish Boy. You are supposed to make the Age Limit/Genre BEFORE The Spoiler Post. :o
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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Mon May 02, 2011 8:58 pm

Quit nitpicking or I won't write anymore! F4

Just kidding.


...But still. ;~;

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Mon May 02, 2011 9:06 pm

NeoFrost wrote:
Quit nitpicking or I won't write anymore! F4

Just kidding.


...But still. ;~;
Fine....
Your title is a spoiler.
ANYWAY~
Nice story though. :D
btw, why is the

goddess being referred to as Athena?
Also! why can't they just use Save files to prevent the world from being destroyed by going back in time? :D
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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Mon May 02, 2011 9:43 pm

First of all, it’s not supposed to break the fourth wall. Second, “Athena” is a joke due to the striking similarity of her words to Athena, about keeping the Maple World safe and stuff.

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Tue May 03, 2011 3:43 pm

Ahh.. I see. Fourth wall eh? :P
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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Tue May 03, 2011 5:29 pm

NeoFrost wrote:
For those of you who don't care for backstory, there are no spoilers. For those who do, go away.

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Tue May 03, 2011 9:09 pm

nice job... How about continuing the story until the battle is over?

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Tue May 03, 2011 9:10 pm

The point of this chapter is kind of a cliffhanger/introduction. Of course people are going to ask where the battle is; that's the point.

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Tue May 03, 2011 9:29 pm

another thread?

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Tue May 03, 2011 10:05 pm

No, I'm gonna post the rest as a reply to this thread.

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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Wed May 04, 2011 2:56 pm

We're waiting NeoFrost. :D
By the way Neo, you shouldn't say 'Final Chapter' as in it signifies that that is the only chapter available, just say Chapter 1 if you are going to make another post for chapter 2.
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PostSubject: Re: Another Fanfic   Wed May 04, 2011 9:52 pm

This is technically half of chapter 1. I broke it off for suspense purposes.

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