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 GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]

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PostSubject: Re: GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]   Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:39 pm

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NEV-
I don't understand your post.
AND I LEAVE FOR JUST 2-3 DAYS AND SO MUCH INFO BEEN GOING ON. I FEEL LEFT OUT BROHAMS

SORRY BROHAM I'm on chatbox if you wanna talk.
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PostSubject: Re: GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]   Tue Oct 23, 2012 11:42 pm

Nop. I have to go anyways.
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PostSubject: Re: GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]   Wed Oct 24, 2012 12:06 am

Updated Chapter 8, about to start Chapter 9 as soon as I do some finishing touches tomorrow, also why hasn't anyone told me about the "Editing Mode"?
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PostSubject: Re: GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]   Wed Oct 24, 2012 11:40 am

ZhoinX wrote:
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Well, errr, panickly isn't a word
And uhhhh the dialogue-only thing is kind of idiosyncratic
And-- AGH WHO AM I KIDDING WHY RANDOM 18+ CONTENT o-e
I edited the OT to make it more suitable, but...
Well, still pending Zeru's judgment.

Well I guess I should've put "in a panicky fashion" but didn't even care that much to look at it and fix it, and also it isn't that much into 18+ as I didn't really go that far into it. I cut it off for a reason though, but the reason for it even being there in the first place I don't know I was just out of ideas for beginning a chapter in a better way than "Royke and Hakura blah blah blah." Regardless of how it came out, might as well add something extremely weird, also the OT? If Zeru doesn't like it though I'll re-write the whole beginning part though to where it fits myfantasy apparent need for "bloody noses". At least I didn't put deep description of the bodies, so it still isn't far 18+. Just stating what I thought. Not trying to argue. Troll reponse anyways Neo? I wish I had such pro vocabulary like yours, ninth grade gives you NEIN!!!

The OT is the "Original Topic" or "Original Thread." I added the [NSFW] tag just 'cause.
Also, I'm a tenth-grader. I just play word games on dictionary.com for fun.
Since Zeru says it's okay, then carry on. o_O
I should post my Pokemon fanfiction here. :D

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PostSubject: Re: GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]   Wed Oct 24, 2012 3:54 pm

NeoFrost wrote:
ZhoinX wrote:
NeoFrost wrote:
Well, errr, panickly isn't a word
And uhhhh the dialogue-only thing is kind of idiosyncratic
And-- AGH WHO AM I KIDDING WHY RANDOM 18+ CONTENT o-e
I edited the OT to make it more suitable, but...
Well, still pending Zeru's judgment.

Well I guess I should've put "in a panicky fashion" but didn't even care that much to look at it and fix it, and also it isn't that much into 18+ as I didn't really go that far into it. I cut it off for a reason though, but the reason for it even being there in the first place I don't know I was just out of ideas for beginning a chapter in a better way than "Royke and Hakura blah blah blah." Regardless of how it came out, might as well add something extremely weird, also the OT? If Zeru doesn't like it though I'll re-write the whole beginning part though to where it fits myfantasy apparent need for "bloody noses". At least I didn't put deep description of the bodies, so it still isn't far 18+. Just stating what I thought. Not trying to argue. Troll reponse anyways Neo? I wish I had such pro vocabulary like yours, ninth grade gives you NEIN!!!

The OT is the "Original Topic" or "Original Thread." I added the [NSFW] tag just 'cause.
Also, I'm a tenth-grader. I just play word games on dictionary.com for fun.
Since Zeru says it's okay, then carry on. o_O
I should post my Pokemon fanfiction here. :D

Oh god you troll, you better not.
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PostSubject: Re: GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]   Thu Oct 25, 2012 4:29 pm

Oooh nice chapter I liek it
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PostSubject: Re: GoldenSunxXxFinalStory - New Fan-fic by:ZhoinX [NSFW]   Fri Oct 26, 2012 2:06 am

detergeant2 wrote:
Hendon wrote:
NEV-
I don't understand your post.
AND I LEAVE FOR JUST 2-3 DAYS AND SO MUCH INFO BEEN GOING ON. I FEEL LEFT OUT BROHAMS
that was random :3
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