| Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:03 am | |
| Well I made a fan sequel, ofc. I won't release it since I don't have permission, and also, because it's on my other computer, which is not on this country. Anyways, here I leave you a fanfic so you can enjoy the fantastic story of the game Hope you like it F2 The game starts at the Dark Order Base. Zeru has just arrived to the Final Room. He is alone, and his friends were left behind, fighting with the other 11's members. Zure is in the room, watching back of Zeru. Zure: I've been waiting for you, brother Zure looks evily to Zeru. Sephiroth Music Starts. Zeru: >:( F5 I will get you back, Zure! And save Victoria Island! An easy fight on the game starts. Not that difficult actually.. Zeru vs Zure After the battle, you are whited out. You arrive at Ellinia Zeru: It was all... a dream...? Antlan: Zeru, wake up already. We gotta go. F3 Serene: He's right , Zeru. We can't lose the boat to Orbis. Dray's waiting for us. Royke: Yeah, I ain't planning to wait for you.. F3 I'd rather left you behind. Zeru: Ugh! Ok, ok! I'm going. You have to go to the Ellinia Station and stuff. When you take the boat, you are IN the boat. Zeru is sitting on one of the chairs. Zeru: What was it..? F1 A black spirit comes and says to him: ???: The dream again.... Zeru: Who are you!?~ ???: I am you. Zeru: Me? ???: You will eventually, use my power. And little by litte, you are gonna be mine F1 Zeru: Not even on your dreams! >:( Zeru make a slash into the spirit, but nothing happens. Royke: Stop talking to yourself and get going. We already arrived! Zeru: Yeah.. You are at Orbis now. You fight couple of monsters and get to a place called ''Orbis Tower'' A half naked man, called Dray, appears. Dray: Hey Zeru! How's it been? *D Zeru: I'm cool... Dray: Anyways, why you guys came here? Royke: We heard you knew about the blade that carries Zure, the leader of the Dark Order. Dray: Yes I do. But you must never tell this to anyone. The secrets of the heroes of Victoria are precious. Come Continued Next Episode. Here are the biographies of now: Zeru: Brother of Zure. Protagonist. He is one of the chosen ones to stop the Dark Order. He is now 16. Still haven't defeated the Drk Order. He truly loves his sword ^_^ Image of Zeru now:  Antlan: One of the greatest thieves by now. Best friend of Zeru, and started their job advancements together. Now a Assasin. He is now 17. One of the chosen ones to stop the Dark Order. Image on Antlan:  Serene: Apprentice of Dray. Antlan's sister. She is a great mage, and always heals his friends when needed. She is 18. She is one of the chosen ones to stop the Dark Order. Image of Serene:  Royke: The #1 Bowman on Victoria Island. Refused to become a warrior. He acts as he's the leader. He is known as The Black Arrow. He achieves to become the greatest bowman on all Maple Story. And beat the #1 Maple Story Bowman. He is one of the chosen ones to stop the Dark Order. He is 18. Image of Royke:  xXxDraYXXX: Simply known as: Dray: is the keeper of the secrets of the Dark order, former member of ''it'' and Serene's trainer. He is an very important character on this sequel. Image of Dray:  Tiger: Former #1 MapleStory player, and new member of the dark order. He joined the Dark Order to get his rank back, and kill FangBlade Currently there is no Image of Tiger with the suit. Soon will be made. There are more characters, but I still won't do them until I have made them on the game. Zure, I think we already know how he is don't we?
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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:37 am | |
| Nice idea for when they save ossirya release :D. O) F2 *D :3 8) :lol!: | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 10:56 am | |
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iTester Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:41 pm | |
| You dont know how it ends.. so you can't really make this game o.O | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:18 pm | |
| I know, and as I said it's a FAN KEY WORD: FAN!~ sequel. Anyways here is the 2nd episode enjoy: 2nd Episode Hope you like it. Here are the updates made this time: Everytime there is a new appereance I will put an Image. Sometimes it will go on ''Comic Mode''. Here we go: Dray lead the guys to a cave. Dray: I should've told you this before. 10 years ago, just when the Dark Order was made, I, Grendel, and Rizzo made a group called The Light Order. We knew all the Dark Order's plans, and we tried to save Victoria Island. Sometime later, I became a Dark Order member. I was spying them, so I could knew their plans. But soon.. They figured out it. So now, I want you to revive the Light Order. Zeru: I don't know what to say, Dray.. Dray: I know you can do it. Also.. Zeru, never go to the darkness, something, bad is coming on you. I assure you that If you don't follow the Light, eventually, you will experience something no-one have ever had. And will have it's consequences. Zeru: Okay.. I'll try.. Serene: Well, you haven't gave us the information about his blade. Dray: Oh lol, sorry. Zure's sword is the darkness source. But remember, wherever there is darkness, there ALSO is light. That's all I know. And if his sword is broken or if he is defeated, then the darkness will no longer come. Royke: Thank you. Zeru suddenly had a PM on his cellphone. PM: Get to my house~! Grendel ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Zeru: Grendel is calling us! Let's go! All: Yes. They arrive at Ellinia. Saxar and Night are guarding. Night: Oh look who it is, the ''chosen ones''. I'd recommend you to get out of here, or you will regret it! Zeru: Make me Night takes his sword and attacks Zeru, but Zeru blocks it Night: Last time I saw you, I almost left you dead. You BARELY survived Zeru: Sore loser! Night: Ugh! Eat this! Comic MOde ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Zeru: DIE!~ NIght: I will kill you! Sorry almost going asleep continue later ^_^. Ofc. I might stay one more hour if my sister ain't arriving. So yeah.. I will comment If I have time. | |
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kankie Super Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:00 pm | |
| Are Antlan, Serene and Royke gone in episode 2? I don't see them | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:08 pm | |
| THey aren't. Only thing is that the fight is single between them (Zeru and Night ) | |
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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:54 pm | |
| Its a cool fan sequel, :D but you will know whats MY sequel. | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 5:03 pm | |
| I know ^_^ I'd like to present, sir. The first ever official Final Story Fan Fic. And I'm proud of it! ^_^ | |
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Kaocon Senior Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 5:08 pm | |
| it seems ok but i dont like it XD ♥ nj on it thou | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 5:16 pm | |
| I'd expect this from anyone so don't worry, Not angry. And what does NJ mean? | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:12 pm | |
| EPISODE 3: DARKNESS VS DARKNESS ZERU VS NIGHT
Night: I will have no mercy on you, boy. Zeru: Heh, Get ready Night: Begin the countdown Zeru: 3 Night and Zeru: 2 NIght:1 Night and Zeru: 0
They fight starts, slashes, punches, even raping (jkz) lol. Everything was in this.
Night is tired and tells with a deadly voice to Zeru Night: You will now... Expe...rience~! The true darkness.. Inside of~me.. Zeru: Darkness is~ useless.. Night: Then tell me.. Ze~Ru...Why, does your aura.. Is full..Of darkness.. Zeru: Don't lie crap~ to.. me! I never followed.. My des..tiny, is.. Night: Light, heh. I can feel, yourself, beggin' to the darkness. Join us. You might be useful. Zeru: If that's...Tr~ue. Then I will use the darkness... to... Save my friends, myself, my people! Night: Bad decision.. Darkness never is used for goodness. You will... FAIL! Night's body is full of darkness and his mace is changed into a dark ball. Zeru: Heh, go and use that power of yours. I can still.. Zeru's body get's covered by darkness and transforms into his dark soul which you can see at the 2nd episode's Comic Mode. Zeru: Kill you.. Zeru's voice and personality is changed by his dark form. Zeru: Darkness can be used as a type of light, but.. This time I'm using it for my purposes and for... KILLING YOU Zeru grips his sword into Night and kills him. Night almost dead: Im.. Possible..
NOTE: Sorry no comic mode *D a early episode always has it's consequences F4. But don't worry I will make a Episode 3 Part 2, becuase I promsid I would release 2 new characters, on Episode 3. | |
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kankie Super Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:37 pm | |
| Who are these 2 characters? | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:56 am | |
| . - Spoiler:
-.- it's you and speedy remember?
and please don't ask those are spilers, BIG spoilers. | |
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speedycop Spammer


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:58 am | |
| I already know =P no need to click spoiler 8) . | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:00 am | |
| I'm glad. I should have put 39 spoilers into the spoiler.. | |
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kankie Super Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:02 pm | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:15 am | |
| Hi, It's me again. I have news, FS2 will have a ultimate pause, 'till next week, due to personal reasons. Today is my last day, and soon I will have to go. After that, you will have to wait about 1 week maximum. Post your suggestions for it right now before I go. Also, I have a competition for it. If you can unleash the code, you can be included on the fanfic as an VERY important character.
Here is the code: MA 3W Z3LE M23DAS LROD
Seems difficult huh? I will give out hints. Here is the 2 first MA refers to the term of US and ME. Also refers to I. At the same time it refers to an deathly disease. LROD refers to a specific rank.
Have fun :) | |
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kankie Super Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:21 am | |
| Aww you going on vacation? | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:33 am | |
| Erm, kinda.. And I've been doing fanfics since I started sharing accounts/playing mmorpgs which was when my cousin which is the oldest on the 2-person-sharing was 17(i think) and I was like 4. Ofc. He started doing the fanfics, and then when I was 6, I followed etc. He's now 25, and I'm 11. I am the assistant sharer ^_^. We try to act as similar as possible to make people comfortarble. We've been together since the start F2 I mean we need a vacation! | |
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kankie Super Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:38 am | |
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joey7 Super Member


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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:39 am | |
| erm kankie ur already on the series. Also, from now on you have to download the fanfic, since part 2 is gonna be hella looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong.
So yeah... lulz 2 hours to go on the boat.. | |
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kankie Super Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:47 am | |
| This is looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonger. | |
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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:53 am | |
| Lol made my page so big o.o. We can wait take your time =P | |
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kankie Super Member

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 | Subject: Re: Final Story 2: The Deathly Meeting (fanfic) Tue Jul 29, 2008 2:08 pm | |
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