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PostSubject: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:23 pm

Date ~ September 17th, 2011
Time ~ 2:00pm
Location ~ Hein's Castle -The Final Room-
Genre: ~ Adventure ~ Comedy ~ Action ~ Supernatural ~ Romance ~ Romantic Comedy
Rated:T-M


Chapter 1 ~ The End?

Hello, Welcome to the After Story, the story you are about to read is nothing more of a alternative "ending" for Final Story II and shall not tell the true ending of how everyone will be.

The room was in total destruction. With the final blow dealt the room was shooken down into smithereens. All left was the 8 Heroes, and the demolished Hein...

Hein:...
Antlan: o_O is it over? (walks over to Hein)

Zeru Stares Deeply at Hein's Eyes

Antlan: *looks at Zeru* Dude... are u Being gay or something?
Zeru: WTF?
>:(
Serene:Though there seems to be something eerie about this
Royke:What do you mean?
Serene:Just think about it... Usually when the Dark Order dies, doesn't the body usually disappear

Everyone goes blank

Zure:Well Mayb-.... *choking/coughing sound*
Zeru:Zure?

a Dark Spike strikes Zure in the Back

Lenna:Zure!!!
Z-Hein(Hein in Zure):I...... I will not die.... until I REBUILD THE WORLD.
Hakura:How are u still alive? Zeru....
Z-Hein:I AM IMMORTAL
Antlan: o_O *walks to the door*
Lenna:ANTLAN BE SERIOUS!
Antlan:*Strays away from the door*
Z-Hein:The world will Burn in Ash and rebirth into my own image.
Royke:There is no end to you.
Z-Hein:Well I Thank You, Good-Bye. (Retrieves Spike and Disappears in Dark Fog)
Zeru:How are we going to Fight him Again?
Antlan:We pretty much killed him already, LETS KEEP GOING!!!
Hakura:... What are we going to do with you Antlan
Zeika:0.0 Guys.... shouldn't we be worried that Zure is gone... and Hein's body is moving?
Lenna:What are you talking about? (looks at Hein)
Royke:Wait what?
HeinZ:W... What happend?
Zeru:Hein might be controlling it, Lets make sure the body is Gone.
HeinZ:Wait Zeru... What are u doing?!?!!?




Battle 1 ~HeinZ~

Zeru throws his sword directly at HeinZ

HeinZ jumps to dodge

Zeru jumps and rams into HeinZ and makes him fall towards his Sword

HeinZ teleports behind Zeru

HeinZ:H.. How did i ?
Zeru Grabs his sword and Charges forward
HeinZ:Zeru what are you doing?
HeinZ:*Why is he attacking me? (looks up) I guess running is the best option for now*

HeinZ runs towards the door, but is interfered by Royke's endless Strafes.

Royke:Where do you think your going
Antlan:DIE *Throws a whole storm of Stars at HeinZ*
Lenna:Lets go Hakura!
Hakura:Alright...
Lenna and Hakura Charges

Zeika starts to Cast Falling Bolt but Serene disrupts the incantation

Serene:Wait, Zeika isnt this alittle bit strange?
Zeika:What?
Serene:If Hein was really controlling his body, wouldn't he have tried to escape with the body, or at least wound us to slow us down?
Zeika:Or waste our time ...
Serene:The spike Hein used had energy pulsing inside it, but going both directions
Zeika:o_O
Serene:I'm not very sure about anything, but we should interrogate him
Zeika:If you really thinks so... Then.
Zeika goes in and tries to convince everyone to stop, explaining the matter
Antlan:How are you so sure?
Zeika: ermm.... I have no clue so...
Antlan:-.-
Royke:Antlan, if Serene and Zeika really thinks so, we should stop
Zeru:Hmm...
HeinZ's thought:Ahh Thank You Serene and Zeika
O) Antlan:Fine... BUT!!! *grabs HeinZ and Traps him with Stars*
HeinZ's Thought:Antlan why?!!??! F4

Battle End ~Winner-NO ONE~


HeinZ thought:What are they planning to do to me?
Antlan:So, who are you and what have you done to Zure?
HeinZ:... I AM ZURE
Antlan:*giga gasp* LIES!!! I told u guys, alright lets dispose of this body
Zeru:Antlan will you listen?
HeinZ:God Dammit Antlan IT IS ME I'm Zure!!! Hein used that Spike to switch our Bodies somehow
Serene:As I expected, but I wonder... if he had it along time ago, why couldn't used it during the fight?
HeinZ:Well... there is one thing probably why...
HeinZ:I... don't really feel so good...
Hakura:Well Hein was heavily damaged... seems reasonable to have someone else carry on the pain
Lenna:What are we doing then? We need to find a healer
Zeru:Agreed, come on lets carry him Antlan, Royke
Antlan:Ehhh? Why us?
Royke:SHH, do you really want the girls to get angry?
Antlan:What do i give a hoot for? The girls shouldn't be so lazy and get off their fat ass
Lenna:.... What did u say Antlan?
Antlan:What? *turns to Lenna* (Thinks:o god!)
Lenna:Did you say i have a fat ass?
Zeru whispers in Antlan's Ear:run...
Antlan Dashes out of the room and Lenna follows
Royke:Seems like Serene and Hakura doesn't really care about that
Serene:Well, it is Antlan
Royke:True ... but
Hakura:What's wrong?
Royke:*stares at something* Nothing... Nevermind, let's just go

Everything goes back to Victoria Base with Zeru and Royke carrying Zure in Hein's Body *HeinZ*



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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:25 pm

o_o''
Hein is being werid, Lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:53 pm

mistakes :
Antlan:We pretty much killed already, LETS KEEP GOING!!! << doesnt make sense
and its hakura not haruka (unless thats your little custom character or something)
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:03 pm

Mistakes: You didn't tell us how the scene looks like! D:
It's all talking. :P
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:39 pm

myfantasy wrote:
mistakes :
Antlan:We pretty much killed already, LETS KEEP GOING!!! << doesnt make sense
and its hakura not haruka (unless thats your little custom character or something)


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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:39 pm

Before wrote:
o_o''
Hein is being werid, Lol.



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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:40 pm

Before wrote:
o_o''
Hein is being werid, Lol.

He got owned so much that he went crazy o_O
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:25 pm

On Chapter 1
You stated this:
Royke:*stares at something* Nothing... Nevermind, let's just go

Ryoke should be paired with Hakura! Hakura even likes Ryoke. :P

On Chapter 2
You stated this and also this:
Zeru:Maybe... i should sneak in with someone *blushes*
Zeru:I still couldn't tell her... even alone.
Athena:I'm sorry, but we must stop Hein from doing something drastic, if I'm correct this world is unlike anything Victoria has seen. This new world contains technology and magic beyond our power. Will all of you.

Zeru does not blush!!.. Or I don't think he does anyway. xDDDD but we all know the truth.
LOL! Zeru is never alone. Some outside force dictates his every move.

Athena must elorborate on her sentence, Will all of you What? You mean >> Will all of you--
You must show that! D:

I'll read chpt 3 later.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:56 pm

Before wrote:
Mistakes: You didn't tell us how the scene looks like! D:
It's all talking. :P

FIXED, and I'll be sure to write that in.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:29 pm

YOU WROTE SO MUCH! D:
Date ~ January 17th, 1999
Time ~ 3:12pm
Location ~ Seles-Dart's House

Who's Seles?

Dart:This is a Dragoon Spirit. The Spirit of the Red-Eyed Dragoon. I am the one chosen to rule over dragons. There are other Spirits, like this.

My Opinion: Dragon's cannot be controlled as a pet or be ruled by humans. D:< That's like taking advantage of slaves...

The crew showed all of their stars. Dart was very impressed.
Question: How did Dart get impressed? He doesn't know anything about them. D:

Zeru:Alright, Dart will journey with us.
Shana:Me too!
Party Member limit is removed or not? Tell me plz. :D

Serene:I've noticed
Zeru:What?
Serene:When and where were we even suppose to meet afterwards...
Zeru:o_O
Serene:... Zeru?
Zeru:....
Serene:.... *laughs quietly*
Zeru:Let's just keep walking

Question: What? O_O'' what just happened?


Hakura walks without looking at Royke, Royke worries about his relationship to her and whether she even likes him.

Question: Wasn't it the other way around? When did Royke like hakura? O_o

Hakura Hands out a bag of gold and pays the old man
State how much gold they has plz! :D

They both stare at each other thinking of what to do

Royke:... Can you stop staring at me like that
Hakura:Your doing the same thing...
Royke:Oh, I'm sorry >.>;

Hakura smiles a little.

Royke thinks:Yes! She likes me! o_O Acutally that sounded wrong...

Statement: If you're going to add stuff M rated, put M rated on the top of the fanfic plz. ^^
LOL. Jk. We all know this isn't going to be M rated... right..?

I stop at chpt 5
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:42 pm

Date ~ September 17th, 2011
Time ~ 3:00pm
Location ~ Victoria Base

Chapter 2 ~ The New World


Victoria Base was filled with hope and doubt for how the Battle of Fate had turned out. Athena Waited in the split of the rooms with a worried face and started plans things out in case. The people were discussing the outcome of the battle, and just then...
Zeru and friends open the door to Victoria Base and rushes in to Athena

Zeru:Athena we have bad news
Athena:What is going on?
Antlan:Zure's Body is Gone and he is inside Hein's
Athena:What? I do not understand
Zeika:It seems Hein used a Dark Spike in order to switch bodies with Zure and disappeared the moment he did, now Zure is trapped inside Hein's body
Athena:This... This is unbelievable
Antlan: -.- damn u Zeika...
Royke:We have to get Zure back to his original body, espacially since we don't know the conditions of this strange technique.
Hakura:Although, we have to search Hein again... Through another maze...
Lenna:MAN! Why do they have to have a huge giant puzzle? It hurts my head.
Zeru:... Guys... Zure is still on our backs...
Royke: o_O wait...
Athena:Lead him into this room *points out a room*
Zeru:Thank you.
Zeru:We should all get some Rest
Antlan:True, i am tired
Hakura:You guys can do that, I'm gonna go outside
Serene:Same here
Royke:Yea...
Zeru:Well night guys... We'll start our mission tomorrow morning.

Everyone Splits out and we go to Zeru :D :D :D

Zeru:zZz ZzZ... Dangit i can't sleep now...
Zeru:Maybe... i should sneak in with someone *blushes*

Zeru goes outside to where Serene is

Zeru:Serene?
Serene:....
Zeru:o_O
Zeru Thinks~Is She standing... Asleep? Or Meditating...
Zeru:Ermm.. Serene?
Goes in front of her
Zeru:o_O *stares at her*
Serene:... *opens her eyes*
Zeru:0.0
Serene:0.0
Zeru:Hi :D
Serene:... *screams and falls back*
Zeru:Serene! im so sorry.
Serene:Zeru... i already told you not to scare me.
Zeru:Yea >.> *blushes*
Serene:Are you O.K? Your face is red
Zeru:Umm yea I'm O.K (turns away)
Serene:Are you sure? *goes to Zeru's Face and puts her forehead to his*
Zeru:S... Serene, what are you...
Serene:Doesn't really seem like your sick.
Zeru:So... Serene...
Serene:Yes?
Zeru:Umm... About us...
Serene:???
Zeru:Well...
Zeru:I wanted to tell you back before we went in to fight Hein... but...
Serene:You can tell me Zeru *smiles*
Zeru:!!! Acutally you know what, nevermind. I'm gonna go back to my room *walks away fast*
Serene:... Was it something i did?

In Zeru's Room

Zeru:I still couldn't tell her... even alone.

The following day to inside Victoria Base

Lenna:Man, i love the beach
Hakura:Couldn't really sleep well, how about the rest of you
Zeru:I slept fine
Royke:I fell asleep on a tree... and had a squirrel attack me...
Hakura:Are you O.K? *Stares at the scratches*
Royke:Yea, it really isn't anything
Antlan:Lol! Nature doesn't like you
Serene:Same for you Antlan
Antlan:NO, DO NOT TALK ABOUT IT
Royke:Talk of what?
Serene:When we were young Antlan and I--
Antlan:Please dont say it *has crying eyes*
Serene:O fine
Zeru:Hey where is Zeika?
Lenna:He is probably reading books in the library

In the library

Zeika:O MAN all these books <3 <3 <3
Man:Um... Sir I think your friends are looking for you
Zeika:What are u talking about? Isn't it nigh-- 0.0
Zeika goes out of the room
Zeru:O there he is.
Athena:Everyone, I think I understand the technique Hein used, but it is still vague and very obscure
Zeru:What is it?
Athena:He didn't learn it from this world
Hakura:What do you mean?
Athena:This Magic is not of our world
Zeru:There... is another world?
Athena:More or less, Hein most likely retreated to this place and is resting.
Antlan:We have to go to that world
Royke:We don't even know how to get there, not even where it is.
Athena:Don't worry, I think i may have found out a plan. Follow me.

Athena takes the Warp Crystal and warps everyone to the Top of El Nath Mountain

Athena:Enter if you will
Antlan:The other dimension?
Athena:Yes, Zure is waiting inside

Date ~ September 18th, 2011
Time ~ 11:00am
Location ~ The Other Dimension

HeinZ:Hey everybody
Lenna:O man, don't tell me we have to go all the way to the end of this place?
Athena:No

Athena Smiles and Teleports everything to the end

Zeru:How did you do that?
Athena:No questions please.

Athena whispers an incantation and a rip in the Other Dimension opens up

Hakura:What is that?
Athena:I had Dark Lord spy on the whereabouts on Hein and he saw him going to the Other Dimension incanting something. I assume this is where Hein went.
Royke:The other world?
Athena:I'm sorry, but we must stop Hein from doing something drastic, if I'm correct this world is unlike anything Victoria has seen. This new world contains technology and magic beyond our power. Will all of you journey inside?
Zeru:Of course Athena, we are the chosen ones of the star.
Antlan:We can do any task together!
Serene:Agreed
Royke:I'm up
Lenna:I'm in
Hakura:I suppose i am too.
HeinZ:I have to go -.-
Zeika:If it is for the worlds of two.
Athena:I wish all of you the best. Good Luck, and may we all meet again.

Everyone prepares for their journey into the depths of who knows what. Knowing not of their future, they go in together and embark on the new experiences yet to come.


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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:42 pm

Date ~ January 17th, 1999
Time ~ 3:00pm
Location ~ Seles

Chapter 3 ~ New Town, New People, New Allies

The young Heroes landed in a strange village, unknown to anyone in Victoria. Starting out in a new continent, how will our young people do against this?

Zeru:Man... what an unpleasant rush.
Royke:Aside from that, where are we?
Serene:... Maybe they know... heh

Everyone of the poor looking village stare down at the them, one of them comes out with his sword drawn out. He prepares to fight

Zeika:Everyone! Watch out!

Battle 2 ~???~

??? Rushes at them and strikes a combo at Antlan

Antlan steps back and strikes at god's speed, stabbing ??? in the stomache
Zeru uses Cutdown and cripples ???
Serene created hordes of Comet Bolt, raining down bolts everywhere on ???
Lenna and Hakura starting to use Bullet Storm and Barrage in a pattern
Zeika Guarded everyone with Magic Shield
HeinZ couldn't use any of his original moves and had to figure out Dragon Crusher
Royke rained down on ??? with Revolver Shot

All the townsfolk went inside their houses to wait of the outcome of the battle

??? then took out a strange looking stone, and started to transform

He transformed into a heavily armored beast with wings.

???:Not bad, but how will you do against the Red Eye Dragoon?
Zeru:Dragoon?
???:Dragoons are particularly humans who are destined to control dragons
???:I will end this now, FINAL BURST

??? flies up into the air and has a Spherical Fire Aura surround him and dispels it gaining Fire Burning Wings, then he charges at the whole crew with a huge fire burning around him, making impact with everyone with light speed, he creates a giant explosion destroying everything around him, except for the houses in which a presence was shown
Everyone falls to their knees and were exhausted by the attack, even Zeru.

Battle End ~ Winner-??? ~


Zeru:This power... it's too strong, i cant transform
Serene:He is too strong for us. Athena was certainly right... Their magic is beyond ours...
HeinZ:We won't be able to complete our mission and stop HeinZ... before he...
???:Enough of this, begone from this village.
???:Dart no!
Dart:Shana?

A girl comes out and knocks ??? down with a bow

Shana:Dart, stop attacking these kids
Dart:Shana stay out of this, they came out of nowhere from the sky, who knows what they've come to do
Zeru:We've come to stop Hein
Dart:Who?
Zeika:Look, it is a really long story, can we just relax for the moment?
Shana:Please Dart, don't kill them
Antlan:HEY who says he was the one killing us?
Serene:Please ignore my brother

Dart tries to think this out and decides...

Dart:Alright, I'll let you go, but you better not pull anything
Zeru:Agreed
Dart:Come into my house

Date ~ January 17th, 1999
Time ~ 3:12pm
Location ~ Seles

After explaining their tale of wonders and heroic achievements, Dart and Shana were amazed...

Dart:I apologize for my behavior you see, Endiness, the continent you're currently on, had a civil war, which included dragons. When i was young, five years ago, my village was attacked by an old friend that we used to call the Black Monster. I never knew who she was until later, she was the killer of my family... Yet my savior. My father, before he went to save the villagers into his death, gave me a memento. That memento today is this...

Dart shows the same stone he used to transform, it showed a Bright Red Glow.

Dart:This is a Dragoon Spirit. The Spirit of the Red-Eyed Dragoon. I am the one chosen to rule over dragons. There are other Spirits, like this.

Dart shows another stone similar to the Red-Eyed, but glows Bright White

Dart:This is the Divine Dragoon Spirit.
Zeru:Amazing! It is just like the Stars we have
Dart:Stars?
Lenna:Yea, like these

The crew showed all of their stars. Dart was very impressed.

Zeru:Thank you for letting us stay and telling us about this world, now we must leave to find Hein.
Dart:Would you mind if i come? I haven't really anything to do here.
Royke:No
Hakura:Why Royke?
Royke:If he holds a Dragoon Spirit, wouldn't others want to take it?
Dart:The Spirits are useless to others other than the Chosen Ones.
Royke:... Well.. I don't know, i despise you a little, but i leave it up to Zeru
Zeru:Alright, Dart will journey with us.
Shana:Me too!
Lenna:Alright another Female!
Antlan:Lol and another guy >.> but you don't see me being happy
Lenna:>.> don't have to be that mean about it
Zeru:o_O
Antlan:Just saying

Dart:I'll show you around Serdio and help you by taking you town to won
Serene:That would be very helpful.
Zeru:Alright team, let's head out!


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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:43 pm

Date ~ January 17th, 1999
Time ~ 3:30pm
Location ~ Seles Outskirts



Chapter 4 ~Lohan

Dart:Alright, first we should go to Lohan to meet the other Dragoons.
Zeru:That would be?
Dart:Acutally a pretty far distance, but if we run we should get there pretty quickly.
HeinZ:Alright lets rush, I don't want to be stuck in Hein's body. I can't even fig---

HeinZ uses some movements and... casts Dragon Crusher

HeinZ:0.0...

Everyone stares while standing back

HeinZ:Let's move on...

~1 Hour Later~

Date ~ January 17th, 1999
Time ~ 4:30pm
Location ~ Lohan


Dart:We're finally here, alright i gotta go do some stuff, u guys can vist around the place.

Zeru thinks:This is my chance to finally tell Serene
Antlan thinks:Maybe I can be alone with Lenna for awhile!
Hakura thinks:Should I make a move on Royke?

Zeru,Antlan,and Hakura:Hey wanna visit around with me Serene/Lenna/Royke?

After awhile of discussing, they depart in groups of two.


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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:43 pm

Ex Chapter 4.5 ~ Relationship

Zeru~Serene

Zeru and Serene walk around the artifact sellers

Clerk:Hey! Would you like a bracelet that would bond you in eternal love forever?
Zeru:What!?
Serene:Umm... No Thx
Clerk:O.K

Zeru thinks:... She didn't even flinch...

Zeru:So Serene... What do you like?
Serene:What do you mean?
Zeru:Like... just what are your favorite things?
Serene:Most of everything ^.^ Flowers,books, trees, grass, animals
Zeru:... You are the chosen one for the Nature Star
Serene:I guess so... Is it weird?
Zeru:Not really.
Serene:I've noticed
Zeru:What?
Serene:When and where were we even suppose to meet afterwards...
Zeru:o_O
Serene:... Zeru?
Zeru:....
Serene:.... *laughs quietly*
Zeru:Let's just keep walking

Antlan~Lenna

Antlan and Lenna walk around the Zoo of Lohan, exhibiting animals unknown to them.

Antlan:Animals huh?
Lenna:Wow! these are so...
Antlan:Weird?
Lenna: CUTE!!!

Lenna goes up to a bunny and picks it up

Antlan:Meh....
Lenna:Don't you love animals?
Antlan:... Not really o_O since we kill it every few seconds

A crowd overhears Antlan and stares an evil look at him

Antlan:... I wish i hadn't said that...

Lenna laughs at Antlan

Antlan:Stop laughing!
Lenna:You should look at your face though!
Antlan:-.-

Antlan Thinks:Well, at least she is having fun :D

Lenna:Let's move on!
Antlan:H-Hey wait!

Lenna runs out of the zoo with Antlan staggering behind

Hakura~Royke

Hakura walks without looking at Royke, Royke worries about his relationship to her and whether she even likes him.

Royke:So...
Hakura:So...
Royke:Why did you become a thunder breaker?
Hakura:Well... They just seemed more interesting than the other jobs...
Royke:I see...

VERY AWKWARD ATMOSPHERE. After a long moment of silence, they end up at an Inn.

Royke:Wanna rest up here?
Hakura:Sure.

They enter the Inn and find an old man and woman.

Inn Keeper:Hello, Welcome to Lohan's Inn, 30 Gold Please.

Royke:C***, I forgot our currency is off from this world's...
Hakura:Dont worry, Serene already thought of that and gave us this.

Hakura Hands out a bag of gold and pays the old man

Royke:O... -.-
Hakura:What's wrong?
Royke:Nothing >.>;

They go up to their room, it surprisingly seems very luxurious and clean. Unlike all the other inns they have traveled to before.

Royke:We should look for the others when it gets dark so we can discuss where were to head next.
Hakura:Sounds good, but in the meantime, what do you want to do.
Royke:o_O
Hakura:0.0

They both stare at each other thinking of what to do

Royke:... Can you stop staring at me like that
Hakura:Your doing the same thing...
Royke:Oh, I'm sorry >.>;

Hakura smiles a little.

Royke thinks:Yes! She likes me! o_O Acutally that sounded wrong...


Zeru~Serene

Zeru: I wonder what Dart and Shana are doing.
Serene:It does seem a little strange that they would just leave us in a city that we've never been to.
Zeru:Let's try and find them.
Serene:I don't really think that's a good idea.
Zeru:Why?
Serene:I have a feeling we might "interrupt them".
Zeru:... Alright.

After awhile they find a carnival of some sort.

Serene:This might seem fun, want to go?
Zeru:Sure. Not like we can do much here.

AND SO, they play some games, have some fun, and then...

Zeru:Hey, a tournament?
Serene:Sounds interesting, Hey Ze--

Serene notices Zeru was up at the registry line, and sighs.

Antlan~Lenna

Antlan:MAN, im bored...
Lenna:Jeez... you know how to kill the mood...
Antlan:BUT IT'S BEEN FOREVER SINCE WE ENTERED THIS CITY!!!
Lenna:We've only been in for an hour
Antlan:IDK about you, but in my time, that's forever.
Lenna:You're so silly Antlan.
Antlan:Hey a tournament O_O.

Antlan and Lenna walk up to the same carnival, at a different entrance of course...

Antlan:Let's enter!
Lenna:Alright! It would be a nice oppurtunity to kick some A**!
Antlan:To the registry!

Hakura~Royke

They leave the inn saving reservations for later, and wind up at the same carnival at the tournament poster.

Hakura:"A tournament to see the strongest warrior in all of Serdio, will be permitted to use ANY kind of special abilities."
Royke:o_O Weird, seems like it emphasized on the "ANY kind of special abilities"
Hakura:But, it seems like fun, wanna enter?
Royke:Sure, though... I'm pretty sure Zeru and the others entered.
Hakura:You're so sure?
Royke:>.> Trust me, I'm pretty sure of Antlan.

So, everyone entered in the tournament, but what of Dart and Shana?

Dart:So, we've gotta be careful during our fights.
???:W/e W/e... When do I get to meet those kids you were talking about Kiss they sound interesting.
Dart:Later, but we got to wait until after the tournament, i need to arrange some plans.
????:Seems like the tournament is getting ready, huge audience tonight.
Shana:Seems creepy...
Dart:I just hope everything goes as planned.

The tournament has begun, and all our fellow mates are ready, but what suprise shall befall on them during the tournament? More misfortune probably, stick around for Chapter 5 o_O IDK why I'm even typing this .... o well.


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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:44 pm

Date ~ January 17th, 1999
Time ~ 8:00pm
Location ~ Battle Arena

Chapter 5 ~ The Tournament, Re-encounter

The tournament screams of about 5,000 people ready for battle, all wanting to watch as 30 fighters duke it out. The excitement, exhilaration, and the blood raging out fills all the warrior's spirits.

Speaker:LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, GET READY FOR THE BATTLE OF THE CENTURY, many warriors of all kinds, many disciples under magic, and many bloodthirsty killers have gathered here for one main purpose, to become the strongest out of all in Serdio! Let's START NOW!!!
Speaker:Our first battle, starting with our 1st challenger! Dart Field!

Dart comes out waving his hands at the crowd, gripping his sword for action.

Speaker:AND COME OUT a man of HUGE proportions, the brute of the north! Welcome.... KONGOL!

A Brown and giant axe-man comes out raging and roaring at the crowd, and some reason winks at Dart.

Dart whispers:remember...

Kongol nods as a understanding response.

Speaker:Alright, GET SET!!! FIGHT!!!

Mini Battle Start ~Kongol~

Dart comes out running around Kongol and slashing him in a quick motion, Kongol can't keep up.

As a result, Kongol smashes the ground with his mighty axe, causing a huge eruption of earthquakes to tremble the whole arena.

Kongol then grabs Dart's face and starts ramming it into the ground and throws him to the wall and does a massive Juggernaut Crush.

Dart becomes very exhausted and falls to his knees.

The audience goes wild as Dart keeps falling.

Kongol starts at the wall, and out of nowhere gains a huge burst of speed, and becomes a huge bullet aiming straight for Dart.

In the end...

Speaker:THE WINNER IS DART FIELD!!!

Battle End Winner ~ Dart Field ~

For no reason, Kongol fell to the ground, most assumed he passed out of using too much of his strength.

At the lobby Zeru was waiting for his battle.

Dart went somewhere else to rest up for his battle, and to meet some young lady.

Alright, at this point ima skip so this Chapter doesn't get too long, I will only put in the battles with IMPORTANCE in it.

Speaker:ALRIGHT BATTLE 12!!!! WE HAVE DART FIELD ONCE MORE PEOPLE, WHAT OUTSTANDING PERFORMANCE HE HAD, AM I RIGHT?

The audience goes into a huge riot as Dart once again comes into the arena.

Speaker:NOW please give your hands up to the most cutest and darling girl, with a monstrous strength behind her, GIVE IT UP FOR MERU!!!

A blue cloth wearing girl comes out, and as expected... and huge hammer o_O.... really?

Meru:ALRIGHT I'm aiming to beat you today Dart!
Dart:In your dreams...

Battle Start ~ Meru ~

Meru comes at an amazing speed with her hammer upfront and misses as Dart slides to his right to dodge.

But, Meru anticipated this and swung to Dart's right, doing massive ribcage damage.

Dart:Meru... What are you doing? We're suppo--

Meru cuts him off as she slams the ground right next to him showing an extremely creepy expression on her eyes saying "I'm gonna kill you :D"

Dart seems very afraid.

Dart keeps avoiding Meru's huge swings, then Meru decides to get serious.

Meru puts up what seems to be a Dragoon Spirit and transforms.

Dart:MERU WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Meru:As i said before this battle Dart, i wasn't kidding around.

Meru transforms into what seems to be a ice or water transformation, the Blue-Eyed Dragoon.

Meru:I WILL DESTROY YOU.
Dart:Have you gone insane? Argh... Fine Meru, if you really want to fight.

Dart Holds up his Divine Dragoon Spirit and transforms.

He is covered with a Bright and Shining Aura, and when he finished, he turned into a Dragon with 6 Wings and a huge sword, and somewhat it looks like his left arm turned into some kind of Gun.

Dart:I won't hesitate.

Dart:DIVINE DRAGON BUSTER

Dart starts out with his headband suddenly covering his eyes and he goes up to the air to concentrate.

Meru jumps around to avoid his attack, but Dart has full control of where she will step next.

Dart aims towards the middle of the arena, Meru doesn't realize it, but...

Dart:NOW!

Dart shoots a thin laser towards the direct center of the arena, but then a light shines brightly at the end of the laser, then it explodes, rapidly covering the whole tournament.

The explosion lasted for about a minute, but Meru disappeared.

Meru came out on top - LOL - and smashed Dart on the ground, in which she then drowns the arena in water.

Dart manages to stop himself before he hit the water, and then starts to charge at Meru.

Meru got ready to parry or dodge any attack coming at her, Dart then flew in a circle.

Meru did not understand of what Dart was doing, so she chased him

Eventually Dart came to a stop and starting to slash Meru through, Meru blocked and attack as well.

Both started to recklessly attack until Dart withdrew and went to the ground.

Meru went down and Dart let her touch the now aquatic floor first.

Following that, Dart yelled "Sign:Divine Dragon's Awakening"

A Magic Rune appeared on the Arena floor, Meru was binded by light, being unable to move, Dart went in to finish the match.

He started to do fast combos, unable to be seen by the naked eye.

He pretty much did a 99 hit combo :O and stepped back to put his right arm on the ground, or impale his sword on the ground.

The whole arena floor exploded... again seriously Dart? Are you trying to make the whole place explode?

The Battle finally ended... Meru reverted to her Human form, as did Dart.

Battle End Winner ~ Dart Field ~

Speaker:WHAT AN AMAZING SIGHT, THE TRANSFORMATION OF DRAGOON SPIRITS!!!

The crowd screamed in a frenzy, some even fainted from the battle and being able to witness a Dragoon Spirit. A very rare chance for commoners.

Meru:I guess you won Dart... Your the strongest Dragoon... Espacially with the Divine Dragoon...

Speaker:Alright! NOW LET'S MOVE TO THE FINAL BATTLE!!!

Quick Note, Antlan Fought Royke (lol ... of course that would happen) Royke Advance, Hakura and Lenna fought (o_Sparkly eyes and Hakura won, Serene and Royke fought, Serene won. Hakura and Serene fought, Serene won. Zeru and Serene fought, a lot of hesitation, but Zeru won.

Now... it Begins...

Speaker:THE FINAL BATTLE, The one to determine the true warrior of Serdio, GIVE IT UP FOR THE BURNING FIRE SOUL. The Embodiment of Fire, Zeru!

Zeru goes out to the Arena to wave at the fans, and wave at Serene and the others.

Speaker:Please now welcome... Dart Field!

Zeru:What?!?!?!?!

Everyone else was also suprised, as Dart came out, he saw Zeru on the arena.

Dart:Zeru! What are you doing here?
Zeru:I should be asking you the same thing, you said you had things to do, but was this what you meant?
Dart:No Zeru... You must drop out of the competition.
Zeru:What for?
Dart:Please Zeru, if you don't, I will seriously hurt you.
Zeru:Are you kidding me? You aren't going to fight me seriously? Alright that's it!

Zeru uses the Fire Star to transform.

Dart:Dangit! I guess i will as well

Dart uses his Red-Eyed Dragoon Spirit to transform

Zeru:So, a competition of two fire fiends? Who will come out top this time?
Dart:I must win, no matter what!

Speaker:get ready... GET SET... FIGHT!

Battle Start ~ Dart Field ~

Dart and Zeru disappear with Fire following them.

The audience were confused and then heard sparks.

They've begun to clash blades together.

Dart was getting ready to use a spell, and so Zeru followed with 99 Slashes of the Fire Dragon.

Zeru:Dart, this battle will have its end now.
Dart:You really think so?
Zeru:This attack will leave you in ashes, GET READY!

Zeru charges in to start his move

Dart:As to you! FLAME SHOT

Dart shoots a huge fire ball, but Zeru goes through it.

Zeru:IT'S OVER
Dart:Don't be so naive Zeru
Zeru:Say what?

Dart flies further up, avoiding Zeru's attack, and what comes out, a huge fire dragon attacks Zeru and slams him into the ground creating lava on the arena.

Zeru:W...What was that?

Serene:Oh no, Zeru looks like he's in trouble.
Lenna:But, he is also fire too, so shouldn't it not hurt him that much?
Zeika:You would think so...
Royke:O GOD, Zeika! HeinZ! Where'd you go?
HeinZ:... why are you calling me that?
Antlan:That's your name... since your in Hein's body
HeinZ: -.-
Hakura:I wish we could help Zeru, but he seems kind of scary at the moment...
Antlan:Zeru finally unleashed his inner rage...
Royke: 0.0 I never thought i would hear anything like that from you Antlan.
Antlan:O no, that is what Serene just said... since she was whispering it
Royke:....

Zeru makes a comeback with Cutdown, but it fails to cripple Dart this time as he does his Dragoon Addition!

Note*:Addition and Dragoon Addition is a fancy game term of saying Combo, Additions were used in which the game was originated from, you will hear this a lot in the story.

Dart swiftly makes his addition, with a flaming explosion at the end of it.

Zeru starts to lose it, starting to get weaker and weaker...

Zeru starts to give up, until... his Star starts to glow.

Zeru:What ... Xeru? Is that...

The Star seemed to talk to Zeru

Star:TRANSFORM NOW

Zeru: ... Alright

Zeru uses the Star to transform, as it seemed it was the Star of Light.

Zeru:Dart, time to settle this.
Dart:Another transformation... I won't let you be that unfair Zeru

Dart again puts his Divine Dragoon Spirit up in the air as before and transforms.

Dart:DIVINE DRAGON BUSTER

This time, Dart immediately shoots out a beam of light hitting Zeru very hard.

Zeru:JUDGEMENT!

Zeru shoots giant beams of light that seems to keep going throughout all of the arena.

Zeru and Dart lock in attacks and additions, never ending.

Serene:This seems to be getting out of hand...
Antlan:What do you mean? THIS IS AWSOME
Lenna:Antlan... look above you.
Antlan:...

Antlan looks at the roof, and it started to shake awhile ago

Royke:Their power is incredible... but it is flowing everywhere, they aren't controlling their power.
Hakura:They're too wild, but why?

Zeru and Dart, right before they make another contact, someone came...

Z-Hein:HERRO ZERU!!!

Z-Hein does a messed up weirdo laugh... and standing next to him was... the leader of Dragoons...

???:Hello Son.
Dart:Father!
???:It's been along time, how is Shana?
Dart:But, you died! You sacrificed urself to Frahma...
???:So it seems
Zeru:Dart, that is your father? Why is he working with Hein!
Dart:I... I don't understand... WHERE'S ROSE?
Dart's Father:In due time son... I just wanted to see your face in the end... at least one last time.
Z-Hein:Before we go, have a taste of my new power!

Z-Hein chants a strange language that made Dart go berzerk.

Dart:What are you singing?

Meru and Kongol outside of the Tournament also heard it and lost control.

But for some odd reason, the song had no effect on Dart's Father.

Z-Hein:Like my new song? I'm still working on it for you Zeru.
Zeru:I'll kill you!

Zeru charges at Z-Hein as Dart's Father slices his blade through Zeru's Chest

Zeru:I... I.... Y.. You.....!
Serene:ZERU!
Antlan:D*** YOU!

Antlan starts to transform and charge in but Royke stops him

Royke:What are you doing?! His powers are far beyond all of ours. We can't do anything...
Lenna:I can't watch...

Dart's Father withdraws his blade and Zeru falls with blood splattering everywhere.

Kongol suddenly came in and caught him, Meru joined him inside.

Z-Hein:Fool... Let's go Zieg.
Zieg:Yes... your majesty
Dart:Father... Why...
Zieg:... In due time my son...

They leave in a dark mist, without leaving a trace, and for some reason the crowd was unaffected and did not know what happend, and the speaker continued...

Speaker:THE WINNER IS Dart Field!!!

Battle End Winner ~ Dart Field ~

Shana came in after resting at an inn (... weirdo)

Shana:Dart! What happend?
Dart:My father...
Shana:W...What?
Dart:... He's alive, but i think something is wrong with him.


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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:44 pm

Date ~ January 17th, 1999
Time ~ 11:27pm
Location ~ Lohan's Inn

Chapter 6 ~ The Story of the War

Zeru and the many others regather at Lohan's Inn to discuss the events that had occurred, and what will lie ahead. Currently Zeru is severly damage, miraculously alive, and is being healed by Shana, Serene, Meru, and Zeika.

Royke:So Dart, it seems you have explaining to do since it seems you know that man with Hein.
Lenna:Yeah! Who is he?
Dart:You guys never heard us?
Hakura:Well ...

Flashback!

Antlan:God, seriously all they are doing is attacking randomly, lets leave or something... We can't really do anything but watch.
Serene:Antlan, Zeru is our friend, we should wait for him and Dart to finish the battle.

Serene looks at Antlan, but he appeared to be gone.

Serene:Antlan...
Royke:Serene where ya going?
Serene:Finding Antlan...

Lenna and others wanted to help Serene and left the tournament.

END OF FLASHBACK

Hakura:And that is what happend.
Dart:Well, that man was Zieg Field.
Lenna:Field? Wouldn't that mean?
Dart:Yes, he is indeed my father... One who was assumed dead along time ago. I never told you exactly everything about my father.
Lenna:Well? Tell us!

Dart has a grave sighs and breathes in deep

Dart:As I told you guys before, my father went to fight the Black Monster, who was my friend named Rose. But, that wasn't his real death. He was being controlled by a man named Melbu Frahma, the man who held the soul of the sealed God of Destruction, Virage Embryo.
Royke:The God of Destruction?
Antlan:Virage Embryo...
Dart:You see, this is how it is. This world was born by the creator, Soa. He grew a tree, The Divine Tree. It grew a fruit that gave birth to generations of beings. 97th being the Gigantos. Minintos the 99th. Dragons from 105th. Humans of the 106th. Winglies with magic powers from the 107th Then... 108th being the Virage Embryo, God of Destruction. This was the creator's will, to destroy the world and rebirth to a new land.
Lenna:That... that is crazy! Who makes a world and destroys it to make another?
Dart:There are people named Winglies, those who fought against dragons abused, even Dragoons. They sealed Virage Embryo in a crystal sphere, extracting its soul from flesh, but later the leader Melbu Frahma took it to increase his powers infinitely. My father, the leader of Dragoons, fought Melbu Frahma and defeated him, but to have destroyed the crystal sphere. The soul of Virage Embryo then roams the Earth to find a body to recover until finding a new one. The person embodied with the Soul is called the "Moon Child". Shana is one of them.

Everyone has a shocked face.

Dart:Also, when my father fought Melbu, Melbu used a petrification spell on him and his spirit lived inside my father. Now that all this is cleared up, let me skip to much later. When all of us Dragoons gathered, we fought Melbu Frahma and defeated him, up to some of his forms called "Generations". A man named Lloyd came in to try to finish off Melbu, but died in the process and gave us the Divine Dragoon Spirit and the Dragon Buster, an instrument especially made by the Winglies to kill Dragons or Dragoons. Together with the gifts, we destroyed Melbu, but only slightly... Rose and my father had to sacrifice themselves to entirely destroy Melbu's body and spirit, along with the Virage Embryo's.
Hakura:It seems you have gone through so much... Just to have two people die...
Dart:But, my father is alive... And if that is so, Rose must be alive. We have to find her at all costs before that other man finds her and controls her. My father is being controlled... I know it.
Lenna:I see... This seems all so unreal.
Antlan:THIS IS AWSOME.
Royke:Seriously dude?
Antlan:Come on guys! This seems like the adventure of a lifetime! We get to experience new things, see new sights, and overcome Dragoons! Don't you guys think?
Royke:I guess you can say that.
Lenna:Antlan is right! We should help Dart.
Hakura:Umm, Lenna? We need to catch Hein... So it seems we were going to help each other regardless.
Lenna:o... right...
Hakura:But, we shall do in all our power to help u Dart.
Dart:Thank you. But, now that it is decided, where to go now?
Kongol:The city of Bale...
Lenna:You don't like to talk a lot do you?

Kongol stays silent for the remainder.

Dart:Don't mind him... But we could catch up with King Albert.
Royke:A King?
Dart:Yes, he is the bearer of the Green Dragoon Spirit. We should go to Bale at once.
Hakura:As soon as Zeru is healed.
Dart:Of course.
Hakura:For now, we should all rest, it is getting late.
Antlan:Alright, night...
Royke:Later.
Lenna:Yeah...

Everyone goes to a seperate room in the Inn and rests for tomorrow.

Guess WHAT!?!!?!?!? Royke~Hakura

We go to Royke sleeping in his bunk bed with Antlan.

Royke:... ... ...

Royke's Dream

Royke:Where am I?
Hakura:Royke!
Royke:Say what? Hakura, what are you doing here?

Hakura runs into him and laughs and hugs him tightly

Royke:Ha-Hakura?

Hakura then kisses him for a few seconds and...

Hakura:I love you!
Royke:Y... You Do! *in a really exciting tone*
Antlan:ROYKE!
Royke:.... What...?
Antlan:Royke~

Royke wakes up to see Antlan with a big giant smile on his face

Royke:Dude... what are you doing on my bunk?
Antlan:Looking at your wet face.
Royke:Shut up man.
Antlan:Who is she?
Royke:Who?
Antlan:The girl you like? ... WAIT... IS IT LENNA?
Royke:F*** no dude.
Antlan:O....

Antlan walks out of the room

Royke:WAIT where the heck are you going?
Antlan:To Hakura.
Royke:...

As Antlan took another step, Royke tackles him.

Royke:I'M NOT GONNA LET YOU DO THAT ANTLAN
Antlan:GET THE S*** OFF ME, I'M GOING!!!
Royke:FINE I'll tell Lenna then.
Antlan:I don't really give a d***
Royke:I hate you so much.

Royke rushes to Hakura's room

Antlan:O YEAH?

Antlan moves with his ninja like speed

Antlan:AHAHAHAH IM FASTER!
Royke:O YEAH?

Royke takes out a bow and arrow and shoots a strange arrow, in which it hits somewhere between Antlan's spine

Royke:HA! Got you!
Antlan:...

Antlan keeps going foward even with his back totally disabled and in pain

Royke:How are you doing that?
Antlan:I'm a Bandit dude.
Royke:.... O.K...

Royke and Antlan keep racing to Hakura's room and reaches it, thus opening the door and blabbering stuff out and waking Hakura up with her jammy on.

Hakura:whoa whoa whoa! What are you guys talking about

Royke stands speechless, drooling looking at Hakura's pajamas.

Antlan:Just to say Royke L--
Royke:Let go!
Hakura:... Eh?
Royke:Yeah! I let go!
Antlan:No.... He Lov--

Royke grabs Antlan's mouth and shoves it with fish.

Royke:Sorry to disturb you m'am... I mean Hakura!

Royke leaves with an irritated face and leaves Hakura really confused

Hakura:... Night...

Zeru~Serene


We go to Zeru and see what he is up to. He got healed 2 hours later.

Zeru:I wonder where Serene is. I want to thank her for healing me...

Zeru walks around and sees Serene outside on the balcony (GOD WHAT A FANCY INN!!!)

Zeru:Hey Serene.
Serene:Zeru! You shouldn't be up.
Zeru:I'm fine actually, which is why i wanted to come here. I wanted to thank you for healing me.
Serene:We are friends though... so.
Zeru:Still.
Serene:The moon is pretty isnt it?
Zeru:Yeah. But...
Serene:Hmm?
Zeru:Not as pretty as you...

Zeru gets embarassed and blushes

Serene:Zeru...
Zeru:Well, I'll be going.
Serene:Alright, Good Night.

At Zeru's Room, Zeru rolls up into a ball in a corner.

Zeru:I'm a failure...
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:00 am

Date ~ January 18th, 1999
Time ~ 6:50am
Location ~ Lohan's Entrance

Chapter 7 ~ King Albert

Zeru, Dart, and friends journey from Lohan into the great capital of Serdio, Bale. The city that King Albert roams with his lovely wife, Emille.

Zeru:So, where we heading?
Dart:North, I do wonder whether the city has changed though...
Shana:It probably hasn't, so don't worry.
Antlan:ALRIGHT LET'S GO!

SKIP ~ Two hours later ~

Date ~ January 18th, 1999
Time ~ 9:00am
Location ~ The Imperial City, Bale

Meru:Alright! We get to see Albert!
Dart:Something seems strange though.
Meru:What?
Dart:King Albert usually roams the streets everyday and says hello to the townsfolk in the mornings, but where is he? Not even a single cheer anywhere.
Zeru:Maybe we should start looking for him.
Serene:Indeed, should we search the castle?
Meru:Great idea, come on.

Our heroes walk to the castle in search of King Albert.

Date ~ January 18th, 1999
Time ~ 9:07am
Location ~ King Albert of Bale's Castle

Dart:Alright, let's see if the guards are willing to le... wait... Where are the guards?
Royke:Strange, it does seem as if guards were to patrol around... right?
Antlan:Where would you get that idea?
Royke:IDK, Hein has guards.
HeinZ:True...
Zeru:Oh you finally talk.
Zeika:... I think we've become unimportant to the story.
Zeru:What story?
Zeika:Nevermind...
Hakura:We should find out inside the castle why the guards aren't here.

They step inside... and see a huge amount of carnage...

Dart:What happend here!?
Lenna:All the blood...
Zeru:I fear Hein might be responsible for this. Come on, we need to find the King's Room.
Kongol:Good thinking.
Antlan:Hey! He finally talked from the past few hours!
Royke:Seriously man?
Antlan:... Fine.

Everyone rushes to the King's Room and come to King Albert's Aid, and it was true, their opponent was indeed Hein. Zeru bursts the doors and immediatly rushes in with weapon and shield in hand.

Z-Hein:Well, if it isn't the worms.
Zeru:King Albert, Queen Emille!
King Albert:Dart... I'm sorry I couldn't fight this man...

King Albert is transformed in his Dragoon Spirit, but has been shed by blood and parts of his armor has been savaged off by Z-Hein, he now lays down with Z-Hein's polearm slightly cutting his chest.

Meru:HEY! GET YOUR DIRTY HANDS OFF HIM!
Z-Hein:Too bad my polearm is on him!
Royke:... The heck?
Zeika:I think he got messed up awhile back...
Zeru:Whatever, we have to stop Hein.
Antlan:Alright, finally time to fight.

Everyone transforms into their Dragoon Spirits and Stars.

Z-Hein:So, 1vs8? How interesting! This gives me a chance to try out my new powers.

As expected, Z-Hein inherited HeinZ's Aran abilities. Our hero has the advantage in numbers, but how will they fare against Z-Hein's new found powers, along with his special chant?

To Be Continued...

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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Mar 20, 2011 12:49 am

Question: Are you still continuing this? It's been a month. :O

Inn Keeper:Hello, Welcome to Lohan's Inn, 30 Gold Please.

Royke:C***, I forgot our currency is off from this world's...
Hakura:Dont worry, Serene already thought of that and gave us this.

Hakura Hands out a bag of gold and pays the old man

Funny how Athena said don't let anyone know about you crossing to that world and Royke said that to the person. :D

Meru went down and Dart let her touch the ground first.

You mean water. She submerged the area with water.



Zeru goes out to the Arena to wave at the fans, and wave at Serene and the others.

I see what you did thar. Not mentioning any others, eh? ;]

Hakura:I wish we could help Zeru, but he seems kind of scary at the moment...
Antlan:Zeru finally unleashed his inner rage...
Royke: 0.0 I never thought i would hear anything like that from you Antlan.
Antlan:O no, that is what Serene just said... since she was whispering it
Royke:....

LOL SERENE. xDDDDD



Zeru and Dart, right before they make another contact, someone came...

Z-Hein:HERRO ZERU!!!

So random. LOLOL

They leave in a dark mist, without leaving a trace, and for some reason the crowd was unaffected and did not know what happend, and the speaker continued...

Speaker:THE WINNER IS Dart Field!!!


that was cheap. D:
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Mar 20, 2011 10:44 am

wtf? lol nice one.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Apr 17, 2011 2:06 pm

Are u still continuing this?
Maaaaaaaaan I want to seet the rest of the story F4
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun Apr 17, 2011 5:22 pm

zhoin is teh unactive right now o-o
btw you should register for the forums :P
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PostSubject: Yo, Back   Sun May 01, 2011 9:15 pm

HERRO I AM TEH YERROWNESS. >.> I Haven't been on for a long time cause my comp got screwed "If you say this word again the banhammer will get you! MOMS" and like Best Buy is fixing it "all my If you say this word again the banhammer will get you! gonna be deleted D:" " If you say this word again the banhammer will get you! MOMS" and like im getting it like the 1st of may maybe? >.> So, im gonna continue the story i guess cause im bored on my mom's computer which is god damn slow on every game i try to play >.> lol btw do u guys still even go on after such a long time urselves?
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PostSubject: LOLOLOLOL   Sun May 01, 2011 9:42 pm

Date ~ Januaray 18th, 1999
Time ~ 9:10
Location ~ King Albert's Room



Chapter 7.5 ~ Penalties and Naked Flying Gir... wait What!?!?!?

Note ~ No more "Battle Start!" colors >.> too lazy and long. P.S. im prob gonna like send in a random part even in middle of word cause mom might come home.

~ Battle Start! 1vs8 Boss:HeinZ ~

Before! anyone can do stuff, HeinZ Freezes half of the people... so... yea kind of messed up "INCLUDES
Meru, Royke, Antlan, and Lenna... wait were there 8 ppl total? D:.

Royke:... Well this is prett-
Antlan:I'MA RIP YOUR F****** HEART OUT AND SHOVE IT UP UR A****** SO YOU CAN'T GO DOWN AND TAKE A S***.

Everyone has a really frightend and yet understandable look at Antlan.

Zeika:Wait... how many of us are left?
Meru:Hi
Kongol:
Zeru:Umm...
Dart:
Weirdo Stick Guy:YO!!!! *waves hand at eveyrone*

...

Serene:
Zure-H:
Zeika:Wait can u even control your ... ermm Hein's powers yet?
Zure-H:Uh... Yea?

Levitates something and hits Hein-Z on the head.

Hein-Z:...

Dart:He seems pissed off at the moment
Antlan:I don't know. But that bump on his head makes him look like a happy w****.

Hein-Z starts to charge into everyone twirling around his polearm in a tornado pattern.

Royke:Right now... I wonder if our journey just turned into a come...dy...

Weirdo Stick Guy tries to break the ice "LOL"

Royke:...
Lenna:O.K SERIOUSLY! WHAT IS WITH THAT STICK GUY!... WAIT, WHY IS THERE STICK PEOPLE IN HERE?
Royke:Exactly...
Zeru:... I just lost all will to fight now...
Antlan:NOT YOU ZERU!
Hein-Z:... Yeah... I'ma leave now.
Serene:...
Zeika:You... seriously?
Meru:BOO That stupid Stick Guy ruined everything. Well, this could be a funny Comedy Novel :D
Zeru:Please don't do that.
Hein-Z:Well, PEACE OUT B******!

Hein-Z teleports out and the Stick Guy is nowhere to be seen... But everyone is unfrozen!

~ Battle End! Winner:Random Stick Guy? ~

Congratulations Party! You all have gained the title of "Comedian Travelers"

Zeru:... Where did that come from?

NO ONE KNOWS SO FORGET ABOUT IT MR. LEAD COMEDIAN!

Zeru:I think we've been screwed...

... YOU THINK?

Date ~ Janurary 18th, 1999
Time ~ 10:00am
Location ~ King Albert's Room's Door

So, Medical Support has come to King Albert to heal his wounds. In the meantime it is more freetime. Too lazy to make words of what everyone is saying... SO SHORT SUMMARY:
Everyone is sad and talks about King Albert, then they decide to wait around in Lavitz old house (a friend if i have never mentioned him) AND SO

Location ~ Lavitz's House

Serene:So, what do you guys want to do in the meantime? "did i just repeat that..."
Dart:It should be a day for King Albert to even make significent progress, so let's just relax and explore the city.
Meru:SO, how do we split up?

Zeru, Antlan, and Royke quickly joins arms with Serene, Lenna, and Hakura "Seperately"

Meru:I'M WITH DART! <33
Kongol:... I go to Inn.
Dart:Well... I guess it is settled?

Everyone agrees and again for the "probably never ending time" to head out in 2-groups.

~Zeru<3Serene~

Zeru's Thoughts:Okay! One more time! Just say 3 words.

Zeru:I Love Y---

Serene went ahead to see a Museum

"kind of Futuristic since their time is ... wait 1999... I shoulda changed it to like 1650 or something... or like 1300. Somewhere in medivals which i forgot which year that was.

Zeru stands there in shock and chases after her.

Zeru:Hey... You coulda like grabbed me or something.
Serene:I'm sorry, but I thought that u would be irritated by that.
Zeru:Not really...

Zeru's Thoughts:I'm more irritated that you just left me there

Serene:So, shall we?

Serene holds out her hand.

Zeru has an embarrased face.

Old Women:Ahh... Young people these days.

Zeru's Thoughts:That didn't even make sense!

Serene held Zeru's hands, being impatient.

Zeru blushes for the remainder.

They go around seeing unique fossils and types of random stuff you would usually see in a museum, full of enrichend history. Eventually...

Zeru:Serene, there's something I've wanted to say to you for a long time.
Serene:That is?
Zeru:I Lov---

Random Naked Girl jumps onto Zeru's head and they both fall down.

Serene goes into a state of shock and has F6 face on, slowly looking down at Zeru and the Random Girl.

Apparently... They are somehow in a D**** S****... BUUUUURRRRRRNNNN.


~Antlan<3Lenna~

Antlan and Lenna are suffering from extreme starvation, so they go to a resturant. Once they went inside, they noticed they didn't have a bag of gold, and were literally kicked out.

Antlan:F*** those g** a** people. Can't we just beat them up for food?
Lenna:Antlan, that would be the worse thing to do acutally...
Antlan:*Sigh* fine... w/e
Lenna:Come on Antlan, cheer up!
Antlan:...
Lenna:Antlan?
Antlan:I'M STARVING!!
Lenna:I can see that...

Lenna thinks for awhile.

Lenna:Can you give me a piggy-back ride?

Antlan has the F 6 Face and then F 3... Then F 7... then a F 4 face

Lenna:... Antlan?
Antlan:Sure...

Antlan now has the really small eyes and 3 mouth on. Then Lenna mounts on top of him. Antlan Piggy-Backs her around all of Batle.

~ Hakura<3Royke ~

Royke and Hakura decide to go on a boat ride around and inside of Bale. Along their way, they see birds of various species in which they never encountered before.

Royke:Nice city.
Hakura:I agree.

Hakura's Thoughts:Well... We got together. Now what?
Royke's Thoughts:Should I confess? Hopefully if I ever do... It will end up like in my dream.

Royke Drools with his head outside of the boat.

Hakura:So. Do you like drawing, or even art?
Royke:Yea. Why?
Hakura:Your an archer, it's natural for archers to like art, right?
Royke:I guess so... acutally, that gives me an idea.
Hakura:Really? I'm glad.

Royke pulls Hakura out at the next stop on the boat and goes into a building. Inside was an Artist and some canvases.

Royke:Ermm.. Hakura. Can you be my Model?

Hakura gets embarassed.

Hakura:What? Me?
Royke:Yeah!
Hakura:Well.. I don't really know if that is a good idea, but sure.

Royke draws Hakura for a pretty long time. Before Royke is soon to finish, a random girl interrupts him.

???:NO NO NO! You drew her face wrong!
Royke:Ehhh?
???:If you want a more accurate painting, you need to make it like so!

The random.... did i mention migit MAGICIAN girl? Gets another canvas and draws Hakura's face. More like 5x better than Royke's.

Royke is all ashamed and humiliated, then hides his face. Hakura walks over to look at Royke's drawing, more amazed in his drawing than the migit girl's.

Hakura:I think it's wonderful! Thank you Royke.

Hakura hugs him and Royke is all energized.The migit girl gives a nasty noise an---

Congratulations, you have earned the title of "Bratty Artist" o_O

....................................................................................................................................................

And that concludes or Non-Canon/Random Chapter, time to go back on track!



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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Sun May 01, 2011 10:14 pm

o_o Since I don't actually understand ANYTHING and just went to comment on this next chapter, I think you would need a lot of fixing.
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PostSubject: Re: Final Requiem - After Story "Fan-Fic"   Mon May 02, 2011 5:33 pm

that ending for zeru and serene was really abrupt
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