Fanfiction - The adventures of the finalstory forumers

Blah, the next part is so hard to write. ... I know! I'll just put a filler here! :D



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Yeah I know that won't work. ._.''
If my writing becomes a bit more sloppyish and has more cruel language, blame the mangas that contain so many curses and my 0 hours of sleep.

Now after a bunch of time passed, I finally finished some work.

Chapter 12
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"Beforeeeeee... Beforeeeeeeeee..." Before opened his eyelids ever so slightly. "God D*m* it, wake up Before!" an enraged voice called overhead. Before snapped his eyes opened and looked around, to see a faint yellow light surrounding all around him. He wasn't standing on anything, just floating. Instantly, he began having questions, such as where he is and who was that voice. As if to answer the questions, the voice said, "You are in the process of crossing your soul to the other dimension where this dimension connects to all other dimensions in some crazy and twisted way."
Before instantly objected to that statement and said, "Okay, I do not believe that story for a second. There is no way I died..." his voice trailed off as he realized that the fight with Saxi had its consequences. Did he really die now? "So if I am going to die, how can I get back? By the way, who are you?"
"You can't," the voice bluntly stated. "That world is running out of phoenix feathers," the voice elaborated. "If you truly wanted to revive, the only other option was to get a powerful magician or person to aid you in the journey to coming back alive.”
Before looked glum, and realized there is no way his friends can get him to revive… None of them are magicians, and phoenix feathers are rare and they haven’t even been to Ellinia yet.
“However…” the voice suddenly said. Before perked up and listened. “If you want to revive, I can give you another chance at living.” Before was surprised and shocked, but then realized there must be a catch… a condition. “Yes, a condition Before.”
‘I knew it,’ Before thought sadly.
“The condition is that you must be proficient in magic in 10 days.”
“WHAT?!” Before shouted. ‘Mastering magic in ten days is impossible, highly improbable,’ he thought.
“Do you agree or no?” The voice asked Before. Before worried and thought that he definitely could not master magic, but if it was to see his friends again, and if he were to somehow get back to his world, he would do it. “Alright, I accept,” Before replied to the voice. He hoped he made the right choice. “Alright,” the voice said. Light suddenly flooded the area. Before covered his eyes instantly to shield him from the light, but glimpsed a huge dark blue feather with a red flame surrounding it. Suddenly, Before became faint and tired. He barely heard anything from the voice. “I bestow you … one chance… 10 days…” but the rest was a blur as Before lost consciousness.

Before: I need to learn magic in 10 days guys!!
Me: -uses nx book on before-

-Before gained 70 levels!-

Me: there you've mastered most of magic :D

I wish though :P

Lolmagic :D U CAN DO EET

So, since my whole BEEEEEPING file disappeared from my computer due to the computer wipe to get the malware out, I shall now RESTART the 9 hours of planning! :DDDDDDD .....
-headdesk-

So, new way of storylining, but basically same outline.


@Myfantasy
Too bad Nexon doesn't own Final Story or else that would be too easy... xD NX is useless in Final Story for now... unless Nexon somehow finds a portal to go inside.... heck that's creepy. Also... there's a bit of cursing now. :D ... I won't add the curse words... or I'll just make them noticeable... somehow.

Chapter 13
Doomsday CountDown
A sharp pain woke Before up and he opened his eyes. Looking around, Before realized he was lying down on a bed with the wooden door across from the room. There was a desk to the right of the bed and the basic square window was on the left. Sunlight is shining through the light so Before knew it was around morning time. Trying to get up, he recalled what happened and realized that he passed out. He must have been taken to somewhere to rest... or had been kidnapped by Saxi. Before sat up and felt excruciating pain on his right arm. "Gah!" Before cried. He looked down and saw the arm was bandaged tightly.
'Must have been an injury from fighting with Saxi...' Before thought.
Suddenly, he heard footsteps outside the door. The door opened and Myfantasy came in with a tray in his hands. Opening his eyes wide, Myfantasy turned and called out to the door, "He's awake guys!" Turning his head back, he asked Before, "Are you alright? You were out cold for a day."
"Yeah," Before replied. "I'll be fine." Then he remembered the 'contract' he had with that voice and said, "Sh*t!" involuntarily. NeoFrost, iChocolate, TheViper, and Shadowfluxx rushed into the room. Words kept coming out of their mouths. In response, Before cried out, "Slow down!"
"Are you alright?" NeoFrost asked.
"You seemed to be dead with your pale face yesterday from a lot of loss in blood," iChocolate replied.
"Yeah, and your 'HP' bar didn't have a red trace in it, so we thought you died," TheViper explained. "Actually... the doctors also said you were probably going to die, and there was like 0.5% chance you'll live. Great thing that your HP Bar started to have your HP increasing again, or else we probably thought you're dead for good."
'Thanks for the encouraging words', Before thought sarcastically and looked up at his HP bar. It was almost full, but not completely red. On the far right of the HP bar, an inch remained blank. "I'll live... hopefully. Anyone know where's my stick?"
"What's wrong?" Shadowfluxx asked with sudden worry while Myfantasy went and grabbed the stick from the desk drawer. Before explained his conditions with a voice that supposedly brought him back to life. "So... you bargained that you'll master magic in 10 days?" TheViper asked while Myfantasy handed Before his stick. "The stick saved your life," Myfantasy said. "The voice must have been the stick."
"Yeah, and the stick can talk?" Before replied. Then he said, "I need to master magic in 9 days. Wasted one day to live and recover in this bed. Anyone know how to get to Ellinia?"
"Yeah!" Myfantasy exclaimed. "This world is so special and magical. You never know if the stick is the voice." Before put the stick away while iChocolate said, "It will take about a day on car. You know the rates, a thousand or so mesos from Lith Harbor to Ellinia."
"For each individual person, or for all of us?" TheViper asked.
"All of us," NeoFrost replied. "If the taxi can fit us all inside. I have enough, don't worry."
Everyone sighed a breath of relief, and then Before asked, "So... how did we end up here in this house, apartment, or whatever this is?"
"My house," NeoFrost replied. " I own it."
Suprised, Before asked, "How did you save enough money in 2 weeks to buy a house?!"
"I am special," NeoFrost's eyes lit up. Before saw the determination in his eyes and what he thought to be a small sign of a evil grin on his face. 'What did he seriously do to get this house,' Before thought, and stopped thinking. He didn't want to know. It was probably going to scare him out of his wits.

Side Note:
Also, did you know that if you say a bad word, the banhammer is going to get you? :D

How does ANYBODY get money in the maple world, huh, huh?! They murder the local wildlife, that's what. D:<

no your supposed to merch like a noob :D
jkjk but who knows, maybe neo is a rich maplestory man too xD
im sure in this situation I would do something completely idiotic for the lulz

Obviously, NeoFrost learns how to make money by doing daily jobs. :D Then he merchants.... somehow....

Story continues!

Oh yah, the monsters may have the money, but the humans also have the currency. In other words: Finalstory people created the 'tokens' for currency, their own money, and monsters used the universal money in the Final Story Realm "Mesos," which is more widely used than tokens.

Chapter 14
To the Cab!
After the group had their breakfast, they decided to head to Ellinia. “I’m going to go to my room for a second to prepare for some things,” NeoFrost said as he got up from the breakfast table of the kitchen. “Be back in a few.” NeoFrost then left and went upstairs toward his room.

“Well, is everyone ready besides NeoFrost then?” iChocolate asked. Everyone doubled checked their items.
Patting himself, Myfantasy answered, “Clothings... check.”
"Items with extra clothing... Check," TheViper replied, holding out the party's knapsack.
"Stick and bandages... Check." Before held out the wooden stick and the spare bandages.
"Money... Check," Shadowfluxx replied as he pulled out 10 100-rolled-up bills, each bill having the imprinted value of one hundred mesos.
"Stuff I'm bringing, check!" NeoFrost called out as he came downstairs, holding another knapsack on his left hand and a large bag of golden mesos on his right hand.
"Oh...!" iChocolate called out, his face in surprise.
"H-Holy...!" Before stuttered, unable to believe what he's seeing.
"Pizzas on a sandwich!" Myfantasy finished their sentence.
"GIVE ME THAT MONEY!" TheViper yelled as he launched himself towards NeoFrost, but NeoFrost just ducked and TheViper hit himself against the wall.

Exiting NeoFrost's house, the group moved toward the busy thoroughfare streets. Looking around, Shadowfluxx spotted a taxi cab parked on a sidewalk of Lith Harbor and called the group to move toward the cab.

"You know, I always wondered," Before said, while walking toward the taxi cab with the rest of the group.
"What is it?" Shadowfluxx asked, walking right behind Before and next to Myfantasy.
"Why did you never get a cleric to just spam heal me before I was dead and my red hp bar was out of, well, red coloredness?" Before asked the forumers.
Everyone was silent as each party member went inside the taxi cab. Shadowfluxx saw iChocolate's face tense up with surprise. "Don't tell me you forgot about Clerics..." Before questioned them. The party continued to go inside the cab. After everyone got inside, Myfantasy uneasily cheered, "Hurray, we have enough room to fit all of us inside!"

" Pa Pa, mi ma ma, lo la, cho lo lo lo?" NeoFrost asked the driver in Finalstory language.
"Ma ma si! Mesos Lo la la all your 1000 base belongs to me," the driver replied. Shadowfluxx handed NeoFrost the bills and NeoFrost gave the bills to the driver.
"TY F0r teh bases," the driver said.

"The Clerics were not near Lith Harbor," Shadowfluxx finally answered. "It seems that most of them were in Ellinia ... and have isolated themselves in Ellinia for some time now."
"Really? Before asked. Then that means we're pretty much screwed if we don't have a healer in our party if Clerics isolate themselves in Ellinia..."

'Good thing I made that up in the nick of time where it was still believable,' Shadowfluxx thought. 'Hopefully, it's true and I didn't tell a lie.'

The taxi cab slowly turned its direction and headed toward Ellinia. With 9 days, including today, the forumers hope to save Before's life by fulfilling the conditions of the bargain with the voice.

Translation:
"How much does the ride cost to get to Ellinia?" NeoFrost asked the driver in Finalstory language.
"It costs 1,000 mesos to get to Ellinia," the driver replied.
"Thank you for the generous mesos", the driver said.

Lol nice..... THATS MY MONEY BY THE WAY NEO D;...

Lol I'm so quiet in this O_e.. just like how I am in real life XD

iChocolate wrote:

Lol I'm so quiet in this O_e.. just like how I am in real life XD

Don't worry. XD You'll get your own chapter, like the rest of the forumers... in its own time. Your 'Test', so to speak.
hehehehehehe
Muhahahahahahaha
BWHAHAhaHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
-coughs- I'll work on Chapter 15 later. If I did go to China, then I'd be writing my fanfics there if I can't get to the finalstory site. If I can, then I'll upload it from there.

TheViper wrote:

Lol nice..... THATS MY MONEY BY THE WAY NEO D;...

Go kill your own wildlife. >=(

oh no... No... NOOO!!! I just lost valuable 10% chapter 15 writing. WHYYYYYY?!?!?!

NeoFrost wrote:

TheViper wrote:

Lol nice..... THATS MY MONEY BY THE WAY NEO D;...

Go kill your own wildlife. >=(

No NeoFrost, you don't kill wildlife. You get money by EARNING IT. LOL. Monsters do the same. They get it by earning it by jobs or by finding it. There are only those 'bad' monsters who do those bad things, such as stealing and stuff. Then, there are those people who do bad things. Besides that, there are also just people who attack monsters thinking they're all bad. O_o AND NO, YOU AREN'T KILLING TREEZ.

Chapter 15
Enter Henesys
While leaving Lith Harbor, the forumes wanted the shortest route to get to Ellinia, so the driver told them they had to go through Henesys. The forumers knew what Henesys was, and agreed. Once the forumers left Lith Harbor and was in the dirt road to Henesys, they looked toward the left and right windows. Plenty of grassland were around the area. iChocolate saw a mushroom with an orange cap standing there. Suddenly, the mushroom wiggled its bottom. Unbelieving what he saw, iChocolate blinked and rubbed his eyes. Looking again, he just saw the mushroom, as still as ever. "What the heck?" iChocolate said.
Everyone turned to look at iChocolate. "What's up?" Shadowfluxx asked.
"The mushroom I just saw just wiggled its butt at my face," iChocolate answered.
"Are you kidding me?" TheViper asked.
"The mushroom is insulting you," Myfantasy replied. "It's laughing at you."
"First time I heard of a mushroom wiggling its butt at someone," NeoFrost said.
"It must have been very offended by you looking at it," Before said.
iChocolate was infuriated. "It can't even see me because I was in this cab!" he retorted.
"You never know," Before said mysteriously. "This is Finalstory. In this world, anything is possible."
"No..." NeoFrost replied. "It's never heard of... you must be special."
"Because you got a mushroom to wiggle its butt at you!" TheViper laughed.

As the forumers talked about the mushroom who wiggled its butt at iChocolate, the cab headed towards Henesys. Once the cab entered the gate of Henesys, the forumers looked to the windows. The sun was setting. and there were many wildlife in the vicinity. Horses, Cows, and Chickens roamed the area. There were several hunters and farmers around as well. The city had plenty of people and grasslands. As the cab entered deeper through the city, more houses emerged. The cab headed toward the left side of the city and the forumers went past the park and saw Athena's School of Archery. "Maybe I should be an Archer," iChocolate said. "It keeps the butt-wiggling mushrooms to stop wiggling."
"Yeah," Shadowfluxx said. "You will just kill them during their half-wiggling position."

The Sunset was burned an image in each of the forumers brain as they past the large fountain of water in the city. The fountain was shimmering with a huge rainbow arching towards the ends of the fountain.
"I need a camera," TheViper gasped in awe.
" I don't need one," Myfantasy said. "It's burned into my memory."
"We totally need to come back here some other time," NeoFrost said.
"A great spot for dating..." Shadowfluxx said, and realized everyone was staring at him. "Hey, it is a good tourist attraction and dating spot with that beautiful view." Shadowfluxx said.

Moving past the fountain, the driver brought the forumers out of Henesys and back onto the dirt path of the city.

where am i???

EDIT: oh... there i am nvm...

there are errors!

heck is not a swear o-o
and

Before wrote:

Chapter 15
Enter Henesys
While leaving Lith Harbor, the forumes wanted the shortest route to get to Ellinia, so the driver told them they had to go through Henesys. The forumers knew what was Henesys, and agreed. Once the forumers left Lith Harbor and..

should be what Henesys was
-or you could just keep it like that-

^, chickens aren't proper nouns, Viper can't "laugh" something, can he? o_o
*Tries laughing something*
Wouldn't it be "[So-and-so] said, laughing."
Plenty of grassland were around the area? o_o Grassland isn't split into pieces. Many acres of grassland might work, but that should count as a singular noun.

""Hey, it is a good tourist attraction and dating spot with that beautiful view." Shadowfluxx said."
Since the sentence about people staring at him preceded that, shouldn't you add something about Shadow's tone of voice?


...Don't look at me like that! Darren started it. ;~;

im not that hardcore at finding mistakes though D:

Viper can laugh at something. :P
What Henesys was or what was Henesys. Big Bang occured. Harharhar. Also, Henesys is different in Maplestory and in Finalstory, as well as the reality Finalstory. :P In other words, what was Henesys works too... although you don't know Henesys looks different than ingame... I'll change that then.

I'm not adding a tone of voice to that NeoFrost. :D Use your imagination and your ability to sense what the conversation holds.

Grassland might be split in Earth, but not in FS. :D
It could be [so-and-so] said, laughing, BUT I used the word 'laughed' which also works in this case. :D

Before wrote:

Viper can laugh at something. :P
What Henesys was or what was Henesys. Big Bang occured. Harharhar. Also, Henesys is different in Maplestory and in Finalstory, as well as the reality Finalstory. :P In other words, what was Henesys works too... although you don't know Henesys looks different than ingame... I'll change that then.

I'm not adding a tone of voice to that NeoFrost. :D Use your imagination and your ability to sense what the conversation holds.

Grassland might be split in Earth, but not in FS. :D
It could be [so-and-so] said, laughing, BUT I used the word 'laughed' which also works in this case. :D

Course he can laugh AT something, but laugh something?
Edit: Wooo, 500th post.

grats neo, and ok keep up the good work before :)

What do you mean Neo? He laughed at the comment. XD You need to use the context clues moar.
and grats Neo. You're 1/2 way closer to getting the spammer rank.

I definitely should so become an archer and shoot that mushroom O)

I think that would be wise.
I can just imagine those buttcheeks shakin in yo face though.

EVAN FTW... owait.. Lol @Neo with the little mistakes, anyways Nice chapter

TheViper wrote:

EVAN FTW... owait.. Lol @Neo with the little mistakes, anyways Nice chapter

Oh yeah, I should totally make the chapter where someone becomes an Evan and discovers the hidden lan- shoot, telling too much.

Chapter 16
Tricked By the Cab
As the cab headed toward the dirt path towards Ellinia, the forumers saw more and more trees as well as the sun setting, and fast.
"We must be getting close to the forest area," iChocolate said. Once the cab reached toward the beginning of the large forest area where trees block out the sunlight, the driver stopped. "KO. YOU JUST GOT PWNED, Su*kah! " the driver said. Everyone looked at NeoFrost as if he had the answers to that ridiculous speech. "Tell me that it isn't a bad sign," TheViper pleaded.
"It's Final Story language for 'This is as far as I go,' "NeoFrost explained.
"In other words," Shadowfluxx guessed. "The forest is part of 'Ellinia'."
"In more other words," Before said. "We find our own way toward the magician's city of Ellinia."
"Ugh," Myfantasy said. "We just got tricked."
"FinalStory's Worst. Cab Trip. Ever." iChocolate complained.
"This is your ONLY cab trip in Final Story," NeoFrost pointed out.
"Oh yeah..." iChocolate replied. "Still the worst cab trip I ever went to compared to Earth."

The Party got out of the cab and started walking toward the forest. The cab turned away and went back toward Henesys. "We should have said to go to Perion," iChocolate said. "Then he would have gone through Ellinia and we could have gotten off there."
"He'd probably gone through Kerning City instead," NeoFrost replied. "Ellinia is isolated with the forest covering the actual city of faeries and magicians."
"It's also dusk," NeoFrost pointed out. "We're running out of time."
"Making Campfire near the edge of the forest where we didn't even go inside?" Myfantasy asked. " Smooth."
"Let's just travel a bit more inside and make camp there," iChocolate said. "We cover more ground and theres enough firewood there."


Translation:
"Ok. This is as far as I go," the driver said.

Lol I like how he always says bad things yet it means something else.